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jaa's progress


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day time section 1/50

night time section 1/50

3 comments:

  1. Very good progression Jaa!
    Now be careful with lightweights - play with them more to enhance your design against the context...
    In the section it is still not clear what you are trying to show us.
    And do not forget the monster texture!! Your drawings should reveal this (beautiful) ugliness, even when under water since a section allows you to see through things.
    Continue working hard! how is the model going?

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  2. I thought that monster texture go with perspective drawing so I didn't put it on my section. I about to start working on perspective drawing for each day and night. and I will put in on the same plate with those sections. It might make clearer view for you...
    for the large section I thought you said something about site section with my new pier and circumstance of it...?

    I haven't start making models yet ka. i think i gonna start making them tonight.
    thanks for your comment ka

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  3. Yes add the texture in the sections as well. You can find a way to express it by line drawing.
    What i was saying is to make your pier/boat more visible by having finer line-weight for the surrounding. You can also add colours and textures to your section and plan drawings (only if very delicately done!)

    and the night section could be inverted - white on black or dark grey-brown (bkk's night colour) with street lights and other as well in order to give the feeling of night-time... (up to you because it uses a lot of ink)
    At least for the perspective it is necessary!!

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